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Immitis

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Neat song! I like the drums and the pace. What I think can be improved: The mix is a bit empty, particularly in parts without synths. I feel like the guitars could be louder. The song is somewhat repetitive; I think you're right that vocals would have given it more life, though you could also add lead guitar or other instruments instead. The short synth notes in the blast beat parts feel a bit out of place, perhaps reverb could make them sound better, or make the notes themselves longer. All in all, I like it, keep it up!

Nekro-Kitty responds:

Thank you for the feedback.

The tags don't lie, this has a great Doom feeling to it. I feel like the mixing could be improved a bit; the guitar seems noticeably louder on the left than on the right, and I think the bass could be toned down a little. Other than that, great song, love it!

My goodness that's a lot of bass. I might even say a bit too much. The bass is a lot louder than everything else. That aside, cool song, nice and heavy.

guyfromKillerRAT responds:

Thanx for review, I personally like the bass a lot

I like the instrumentation and mixing but the... "glitchiness", the disjointed randomness of everything makes the song very hard to follow and I think it'd be much better with a simple beat and a continuous flow. Maybe go for polyrhythms and uneven time signatures instead, if you're intent on continuing this style.

DanZman responds:

Thanks for the advice Immitis! I will try and improve this in later songs with this style!

I really like the synths. I feel like the kick drum should be quieter and there shouldn't be as much of it. But other than that, great song.

Csucskos responds:

Thanks man! Appreciate the criticism.

Love the song, but the violin VST sounds pretty bad, you should try a different one or play it on a real violin.

I feel like the constant vocal sample is totally ruining it because it becomes hard to focus on the music itself, pretty cool otherwise.

I love everything about this. My only complaint is that the "meows" starting at 2:45 are a bit too loud, they are distracting from the overall chill feel of the song.

quantumdylan responds:

Thank you very much! I made a slight alteration to the brass stabs there, should be a bit less stabby now. :D

I create electronic music inspired by metal and darksynth. I make my music in FL Studio.

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